CyCon - Pg 12.5 PhotoChop

Okay,
First off, these characters/situations are &™ & © of Flamekin2 2011, 2012.

This one is my attempt to split up the dialog on pg 12, HERE: ( fav.me/d48oa7j )

I'm still fiddling with pg 12 as it is...

I wanted to put a bit more fire under Adam's 'hood', so to speak...Let him vent some of his frustration & rage...but remind him that he STILL has to Become...

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